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    dots Submission Name: My Auroradots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       this one is a work in progress, dedicated to my fiance...a thanks for saving my life


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    dotsMy Auroradots
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    a hopeful stream illuminates my dreams
    you are my aurora
    a band of light in my sky of night
    you are my aurora
    my oxygen when i can not breathe
    my love, my life, the song i sing...




    Submitted on 2009-06-24 09:50:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's a good start. I hope you add to it soon. It could come out really good.
    | Posted on 2011-05-01 00:00:00 | by skinnydrew | [ Reply to This ]


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