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    dots Submission Name: A Broken Heart leaves a Broken Persondots
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    Author: saika
    ASL Info:    17-F-chicago
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 2/5/8
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 648
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       i felt so...blah when i made this hahaha (srry about typos...if there are any)


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    dotsA Broken Heart leaves a Broken Persondots
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    I love you...
    you're my everything..no one else
    can replace you in my life..

    Yeah right...those are the words right there
    that i hate..and anything related to it

    How much do you love me?
    Do you love me enough to not break my heart?

    Do you love me enough to wipe away my tears and tell me that everything is going to be ok.

    Do you love me enough to kiss me in the pouring rain? Can I trust you will all my heart?

    Can you love me forever? Can you not cheat on me for someone who's better than me?

    Will you accept me for who i am?

    Half the time guys lie if you ask them this...


    When you hurt me
    do you know what kind of scar you leave?

    I may act like it's ok, it's not.

    I may smile outside, but i cry inside

    You left me in a total wreck
    I don't know what to do without you
    I cry everyday, longing to be with you
    But...you're not...I can't

    I have to learn to move on...
    But every time i see your face
    I shatter inside...

    The heartache you left me with...is too much
    I spill the blood of my soul slowly
    falling to the darkness

    spiraling down..deeper and deeper

    but...someone calls my name...the darkness is starting to go away...

    Who is it?




    (see...happy ending...)






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