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    Author: cshv
    ASL Info:    19/m/fl.
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 2/5/3
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Dark
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    the sky rains in a midnight dust smothering the light
    lost within a boy stare at the darkning world
    standing ever so still
    drowning with in
    as the strobe light flashes
    glimpses of a lost life
    sinks deeper and deeper
    the shadow crawls along the wall looking for love
    praying for light
    but all that comes is rain
    poring throe the cracks of the flor until all is seemingly lost
    as the watter rises
    the roof holds
    slowly drowning the boy
    leaving only a mere out line of a lost life, a exoskeleton
    a hollow image of what the world wanted to see
    for all he did was talk throe silent dreams
    fearing the dragons sored peering dawn
    living a lie
    just trying to being every thing u wanted me to be




    Submitted on 2009-06-24 17:22:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      incredibly well written. however honey, i'm buying you a dictonary. I love you honey but write more poetry. you have such raw talent.
    -Rachi:)
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]



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