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bad girl people do that!

Author: joezwells
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no will probably understand this. i wrote this for my big sisters its all our inside jokes!! jackie...i love you super long time

bad girl people do that!

jackie bad girl
makes me laugh so hard i hurl
makes my speech slur
makes my tummy whirl (mint pepto)

we are the same same
its so funny we are so lame
both can always handle the pain
cause we can blame it on being insane

we have no shame
keep eachother tamed
everytime we do something we have horrible aim
but fukc it, we always take the blame

we dont care
never back down on a dare
we even corndogged a bear
cause we are friends and we share

man bear pig loves you
and admires everything you do
what you mean to me you have no clue
silly big little sister i love you

Submitted on 2009-06-24 23:08:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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