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    dots Submission Name: bad girl people do that!dots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       no will probably understand this. i wrote this for my big sisters its all our inside jokes!! jackie...i love you super long time


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    dotsbad girl people do that!dots
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    jackie bad girl
    makes me laugh so hard i hurl
    makes my speech slur
    makes my tummy whirl (mint pepto)

    we are the same same
    its so funny we are so lame
    both can always handle the pain
    cause we can blame it on being insane

    we have no shame
    keep eachother tamed
    everytime we do something we have horrible aim
    but fukc it, we always take the blame

    we dont care
    never back down on a dare
    we even corndogged a bear
    cause we are friends and we share

    man bear pig loves you
    and admires everything you do
    what you mean to me you have no clue
    silly big little sister i love you




    Submitted on 2009-06-24 23:08:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ITS REALLY SWEET!!! LOVE TO YOU N YOUR SISTER!!!!
    | Posted on 2009-06-25 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]


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