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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 639



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    I tried to be your definition of fabulous,
    I tried to be your everything you wanted in me,
    I tried to be everything you dreamed of,
    And everything you dreamed on,
    Everything amazing,
    Yet I was everything but in the end,
    I tried to be your get away paradise,
    I tried to be something that I wasn’t to you,
    I wanted you to love me forever,
    And we ended up for never,
    I had to try to make this go away,
    I had to try to stand my ground,
    You’re what I want and now I see,
    I’m not everything,
    I’m just nothing,
    Again.




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