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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       changes come and go as friends so but unlike friends "changes" will always affect you.


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    dotsChangesdots
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    Another rough day...
    Another day to push forward..
    Yet another day of disappointment.

    Not a surprise to me,
    Not a shock to me all,
    Although ultimately I feel as if I am expecting something...

    I suppose its change,
    Change ...

    Seems to be happening often to myself lately,
    and yes

    It's to these events I give props to..
    That I have in which turned them around harmfully..

    Simply putting this all on myself!
    Its because of these choices I chose to make!

    I spite these changes that have taken place within this life of mine.
    And soon they will take their toll and leave what they shall behind with me!

    ..Granted some are good...
    Wonderful..

    Yet the others that remain, are horrid!
    Always leaving a mark where they left off..

    Whether its a sweaty, tear-jerking nightmare
    Or a sudden depressing memory of how things use to be!

    These changes are inconsistent
    Never knowing...

    When?
    Where?
    How?

    Though. I suppose its this way for a reason,
    I shall simply accept that!

    "God does not give us tasks we cannot handle and/or overcome"




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      I cannot help but believe that, for every terrible or bad thing that we've had happen to us or had to endure, the equivalent good things will happen at a later date. I hope that is so in your case, cause you would have a lot of good things happen to make up for the bad things.

    I think that it's good that you write about it.
    | Posted on 2009-06-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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