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    dots Submission Name: Possible Compatibilitydots

    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 16/21/57
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       i really need to stop falling so easily for girls, hahaha.

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    dotsPossible Compatibilitydots

    i won't hurt you

    it's not something i have to try

    to do, i know it's possible

    to be true to one as beautiful

    as you, as only you

    if you never give it a chance

    believing some romance

    could our hearts ever dance?

    or be forever locked in a defensive stance?

    you won't change me

    i won't change you

    i'd like to move it from your sleeve

    this i believe is something i could reprieve

    it was nice to see that someone was as jumpy as me

    it was a little much talking to one as flustered as me

    i fluttered when you giggled at me

    then today you sank me

    i guess it's better now than later to figure our incompatibility

    how similar did you want us to be?

    impossible for us to always agree

    unless we are bark from the same tree

    in that case friends is fine with me

    maybe your cuteness could be with me

    after some time maybe you'll discover i can be trustworthy

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