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i really need to stop falling so easily for girls, hahaha.
i won't hurt you
it's not something i have to try
to do, i know it's possible
to be true to one as beautiful
as you, as only you
if you never give it a chance
believing some romance
could our hearts ever dance?
or be forever locked in a defensive stance?
you won't change me
i won't change you
i'd like to move it from your sleeve
this i believe is something i could reprieve
it was nice to see that someone was as jumpy as me
it was a little much talking to one as flustered as me
i fluttered when you giggled at me
then today you sank me
i guess it's better now than later to figure our incompatibility
how similar did you want us to be?
impossible for us to always agree
unless we are bark from the same tree
in that case friends is fine with me
maybe your cuteness could be with me
after some time maybe you'll discover i can be trustworthy
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