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    dots Submission Name: An expected elegydots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    20/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 44/96/85
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsAn expected elegydots
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    A lot now
    Of dead feet dancing
    And pygmies crying
    “I praised Gulliver!”

    “I took his brittle
    Body when it was low”
    And laced the head
    With sly cynicism.

    When we hear a roar
    Is it fear or curiosity?
    Is it dying?
    Can we lock up everything
    Away from everyone?

    Then it will be time
    To feel the bottom
    Of the tombstone
    With our dirty hands
    And we will feel deep faults
    And brake our fingernails
    On its faux-hard stone.

    No one carried
    Any weight.

    The gaunt
    Colossus had no one.





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