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    dots Submission Name: forget me notsdots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsforget me notsdots
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    there's nothing that i can say, that you haven't heard one to many times.
    so why do i still find myself trying so hard.
    i'm tired of soaking my pillows with tears every night, so i can just get some sleep.

    there's not one person who can tell me what's wrong with me. what i can do to not feel this anymore.

    all i want is to be numb from this feeling. this single feeling. please take it away. i don't want it anymore. i want to forget what i've come to learn.

    let's start at forgetting, and end at forgotten.




    Submitted on 2009-06-26 13:38:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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