"She's Way Too Tall" by Ron Cole

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Author:	Ron Cole
Elite Ratio:	3.87 - 1932/1321/203
Words:	105

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	151
Average Vote:	4.0000
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"She's Way Too Tall" dots

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I met a gal
down in the Valley
she’s known there
as Long Tall Sally

prettiest Gal that
I’ve ever seen
but Boy she’s tall and
Boy she’s lean

we hold hands
in the Shopping Mall
I’d like to kiss her but
she’s way too tall!!

When we make love
it’s not so funny
my brow comes only
to her tummy

when we’re nose to nose
my toes are in it
and when were toes
to toes
my nose is in it

there’s just no getting
round it all
I’d like to kiss her
but she’s way too tall!!!

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||| Comments |||
  Love this.
The "limerick- like" vibe showcased your talent and wit.
Yuh so funny.
| Posted on 2009-09-09 00:00:00 | by rytrsbloc | [ Reply to This ]
  Love this.
The "limerick- like" vibe showed of your talent.
Yuh so funny!!!
| Posted on 2009-09-09 00:00:00 | by rytrsbloc | [ Reply to This ]
  Ok, I have the eerie feeling I have heard this before. Was it turned into a country song after you posted it here? If it wasn't, then it should be. I could just hear this little ditty tearing up the airwaves, and see a funny video to go with it.

soul-hugger

| Posted on 2009-09-03 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
  Hahahaha cute really cute (and a little dirty too) amde me smile on a gloomy day thank you Ron.

Smiling as he clicks away,
Jay.
| Posted on 2009-07-01 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
  Very comical Ron, and very well written. Hope it works out well for them both !!!!!!

Frank.
| Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very clever and funny. Thank you for making me smile.
| Posted on 2009-06-28 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
  lol this is cute .... you made me smile :-D keep on posting!!

Jackz
| Posted on 2009-06-27 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  Omigosh! What a quandary this couple is in!
Poor Sally needs a taller fella and our fella needs a little lady!
What a delightfully funny tale, Ron!
Thanks for the laugh.

| Posted on 2009-06-26 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]

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