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    dots Submission Name: Getting Theredots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 12/17/34
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 669



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    dotsGetting Theredots
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    How do we obtain
    Or even explain
    How to avoid
    All the pain
    That comes
    With the search
    For
    Release

    Peace
    Making war cease
    Holding hands
    Creating bands
    Of
    Harmony
    And
    Finding the land
    Of milk and honey

    War and nukes
    Makes one want to puke
    Stop this mess
    And caress
    This soul of peacefulness

    We must learn to get along
    Do away with all that is wrong
    Cast aside
    Our differences
    And stand side by side
    And ride
    The wings of freedom




    Submitted on 2009-06-26 16:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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