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    dots Submission Name: lillte blue botdots
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    Author: anberlin
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Story/Being a Teen
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    dotslillte blue botdots
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    i have a friend, his name is stan.
    my friend is quite big, much larger then your hand.
    my friend is made of metal, yes, i created him.
    his collor is blue, and his features amend.

    he beeps and bapps, this way and that.
    he toots and totters, that way and this.
    he wears a pink hat.
    the pink hat he wears is his.

    he is quite nice, i assure you that, he makes me tea.
    and feeds me well.
    ....
    idk, what i was thinking, maby nothing at all... sorry, will have better soon..




    Submitted on 2009-06-27 00:50:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sounds like a little bouncy number from you that skips along to an upbeat tune.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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