This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17. It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different. All content will be deleted. Backup anything important. --- Staff
|
|
Seems all just blur, but it feels like another day sitting across from your pretty face In the corner of the cafe- with smoke filled air, You're staring into the distance, with saddness in your eyes, so I write my dreams on paper napkins just to wipe your tears aside- but somethings stinging at my heart As everything fades away, It's been years I've held onto What you so carelessly threw away- Now i hold such woeful sorrows Close to my heart, Hoping one day they'll fade, And we'll stop growing apart But you left me for years, Hallucinating colours, better times and replayed memories and a sudden change of the current, but how- if you won't meet me halfway And just continue to wash My soul away No one said dreams had to be perfect- & I never could promise you everything But my ink stained napkins, were always better than nothing. Cause i can't afford to give More than a poor man, can afford to receive. If my dreams mean so little, then there's nothing else i can say that the sound of my breaking heart couldn't put in a better way. |
I don't know what it is about your writing but I love your poetry. It's the words and their meaning, not by what you mean but how it speaks to me. Your words change every time I read them. Every time I read one of your poems I get inspired. And that, to me, is the greatest compliment I can give you. "there's nothing else I can say that the sound of my.. heart couldn't put in a better way." -JK | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by MidnightSun89 | [ Reply to This ] | I agree it does paint a very sad and heartbreakingly beautiful picture. You not only managed to show the image but also to evoke those emotions of the poem. Allowing your audience to both see and feel what is happening. I look forward to reading more of your work. | Raye | Posted on 2009-06-27 00:00:00 | by Raye | [ Reply to This ] | wow this is very heartfelt I love how you paint a picture for me how as I am reading this the picture in my mind develops more and more. By the end I have a complete understanding of what you wanted your reader to hear. my favorite part!!!! | No one said dreams had to be perfect- & I never could promise you everything But my ink stained napkins, were always better than nothing. Cause i can't afford to give More than a poor man, can afford to receive The ending... of this passage "Cause I can't afford to give More than a poor man, can afford to receive" WOW speaks volumes to me!!! Keep up the great posts | Posted on 2009-06-27 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ] | |