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    dots Submission Name: happydots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 541
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 520



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       oh happy days...


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    dotshappydots
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    i'm smiling.
    this day came true.
    i can sleep in yours arms.
    i'm curled up to you.

    you kiss my forehead.
    look deep in my eyes.
    you held me while i shook.
    you held me while i cried.

    you hold me so close.
    i can hardly breathe.
    then you say those three little words.
    it means everything to me.

    i'm so happy
    i don't really know why.
    it all changed.
    when you looked in my eyes.




    Submitted on 2009-06-27 11:35:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Have you seen the movie "Say Anything" with John Kusak(?) There is a girl in the movie that writes all songs about her ex-boyfriend....about how she hates him, but she loves him.....I think you might be that girl. I liked your poem and your prose is a lucky person to have someone that thinks so much of them.
    | Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by Spin | [ Reply to This ]
      It's cool you have someone like the person you described to keep you happy when other things might not be so great. Nice ,simple and to the point write


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    | Posted on 2009-07-01 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great job! I liked the poem, it lent happy thoughts to me in these dark times. I know that we've already talked, but I still feel empty. Reading this poem made me forget that, for a short while and focus on the important things. Thank you for writing, and, more than that, for sharing. It's one thing to write something, and another thing entirely to post it for all to see. It is an amazing poem and you should always be confident in your ability to produce a masterpiece from scratch and an amazing poem with flowing verse from within your heart. Keep up the flow of rich poetry and make sure to post every last one of them.

    ~Dreamer
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is sweet. Made me smile. Made me happy too.
    | Posted on 2009-06-28 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
      who are you with now?
    | Posted on 2009-06-28 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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