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    dots Submission Name: If you were mine..dots
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    Author: Myrrh
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 20/17/26
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       this is only a confession..


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    dotsIf you were mine..dots
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    I don't know why
    I miss you so much
    I don't know why
    I love you so much

    You are out of reach
    irresistible, inaccessible,
    but i wonder
    if you were mine and i yours
    this world would be a lot
    more beautiful.

    I would have cried still
    but could have your chest
    to hide my face
    I would have obstacles still
    but also your arms
    to keep me from falling.

    You are my need, my passion,
    And the fact..i can never have you
    is destroying me from the inside
    My little dream home will never be there
    nor your sweet words, nor our loving moments
    but i'll keep the remembrance
    because your godly touch is right with me
    imprinted on heart...i feel you dear
    in this very life's beat..





    Submitted on 2009-06-27 12:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      some confession. its from the heart and very honest. this made me sad cause you can almost feel your pain as you read. hang in there it things can only get better. nice work!
    *joez*
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by joezwells | [ Reply to This ]



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