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If you were mine..

Author: Myrrh
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this is only a confession..

If you were mine..

I don't know why
I miss you so much
I don't know why
I love you so much

You are out of reach
irresistible, inaccessible,
but i wonder
if you were mine and i yours
this world would be a lot
more beautiful.

I would have cried still
but could have your chest
to hide my face
I would have obstacles still
but also your arms
to keep me from falling.

You are my need, my passion,
And the fact..i can never have you
is destroying me from the inside
My little dream home will never be there
nor your sweet words, nor our loving moments
but i'll keep the remembrance
because your godly touch is right with me
imprinted on heart...i feel you dear
in this very life's beat..

Submitted on 2009-06-27 12:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  some confession. its from the heart and very honest. this made me sad cause you can almost feel your pain as you read. hang in there it things can only get better. nice work!
| Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by joezwells | [ Reply to This ]

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