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    dots Submission Name: Back Thendots
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    Author: inkonspikuous
    ASL Info:    21/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    6.02 - 77/74/27
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 39
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 822



    Description:
       Poem about the death of someone critical to your survival...or your will to survive.

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    dotsBack Thendots
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    I left to go back
    to when we had forever,
    but time found me
    just as you were passing away.

    So I visited present’s reality
    to send my regards,
    A ghost amongst absent survivors
    who had already buried you
    beneath their bitterness and scars.

    They cluttered together
    and mumbled of how
    unfortunate instances are to be.
    I toasted to your ‘long ago’,
    the presence you had,
    And the now missing essence.

    They left to tend to life’s miserable outlook
    determined to fight through
    despite how hard your absence was going to be
    But, me, I stayed
    to watch over our wonderful memories’ past,
    basking in how easy it wasn’t,
    forever waiting for our future to catch up.




    Submitted on 2009-06-28 14:31:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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