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    dots Submission Name: Your Knights Prayer.dots
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    Author: WolvenGlade
    ASL Info:    16/Male/Britain
    Elite Ratio:    3.43 - 14/13/7
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 72
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 377



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    dotsYour Knights Prayer.dots
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    I am your Shadow in the Light

    And your Light in the Dark

    I will be their in every Fight

    And in every Heart

    If you Believe in Me

    I will Believe in You

    With my very last Breath

    Of my nearing Death

    But heed my Warning

    For the Reaper is Calling.




    Submitted on 2009-06-28 16:49:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I disagree with Cathartus I think that the thing was very well written and the whole thing was pretty good for the build up. "But heed my warning for the Reaper is calling." Was the best and very original.
    Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by XemosoraX | [ Reply to This ]
      It was god, it was good and then I got to the end. I didnt think the last couple of lines did justice to the beginning chunk. I liked it though just wasnt feelin thelast bit.
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by Cathartus | [ Reply to This ]


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