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    dots Submission Name: In love with my friend. :(dots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 596



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       I have fallen in love with my friend Paul but I'm to scared to tell him how i feel so i wrote this poem


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    dotsIn love with my friend. :(dots
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    Oh my god I can't do this,
    I can't be your friend
    with feelings like this
    they make me love you.
    I can't sit by and
    watch you get hurt,
    I just wanna kiss you
    hold you and make you
    feel safe.
    But deep down in my
    heart I know that
    somehow I have to let
    you go even if it means
    my heart will be broken
    into a tiny million
    pieces with no hope
    of ever loving again,
    that is something I am
    willing to do in order
    to keep secretly loving you.




    Submitted on 2009-06-28 17:20:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Paul's a lucky guy to have your love and friendship. I think we've all been in love with someone secretly, at some time in our past. Everyone who has will certainly be able to relate to your fine poem.
    | Posted on 2009-06-28 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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