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unwelcoming mornings

Author: joezwells
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 64 /79 /55
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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unwelcoming mornings

long days
turn into unwelcomed morinings
staring at the clock
your life grows boring

longing for the nights that are spent in deep sleep
waiting for the hour that your dreams peek
life as you know it has begun to leek
searching for the answers that you aggresively seek

how in the hell do you make it through days like this
time spent wondering
you start to realize experiences missed
waiting for that specail person to give you that amazing kiss
realizing its a dream you wake up pissed

Submitted on 2009-06-29 00:39:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that was hella cute but sad at the same time, I'm sorry you can't sleep I hope it's getting a little better. :(
| Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]
  wow I wasn't expecting that ending but that's why I liked it. It was rolling and tumbling me through the entire post and it kept built although I think adding more may make it better but nevertheless I liked this

| Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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