unwelcoming mornings

Author: joezwells Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 64 /79 /55 Words: 93

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unwelcoming mornings

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long days turn into unwelcomed morinings staring at the clock your life grows boring longing for the nights that are spent in deep sleep waiting for the hour that your dreams peek life as you know it has begun to leek searching for the answers that you aggresively seek how in the hell do you make it through days like this time spent wondering you start to realize experiences missed waiting for that specail person to give you that amazing kiss realizing its a dream you wake up pissed

Submitted on 2009-06-29 00:39:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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that was hella cute but sad at the same time, I'm sorry you can't sleep I hope it's getting a little better. :(

| Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]

wow I wasn't expecting that ending but that's why I liked it. It was rolling and tumbling me through the entire post and it kept built although I think adding more may make it better but nevertheless I liked this Jackz

| Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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