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Author: Whatamidoing
ASL Info:    14 f scotland
Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 2 /3 /6
Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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We pass each other everyday,
A nod of the gead and away,
With the nod you catch my heart,
And take it with you as you go.

Now it's more than just a nod of the head,
A smile everday and my heart is yours,
Please keep it safe,
I don't want to be broken.

Everyday you take my heart,
All i can do is think,
What if it was more than a smile?

Submitted on 2009-06-29 04:23:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This reminds me of when I was seventeen only it was a wink not a nod. It makes me happy. Thank you. By the way, I married him.
| Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]

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