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    dots Submission Name: Never againdots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    18/girlie/nevada
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 14/56/67
    Words: 393
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2040



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    dotsNever againdots
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    you think cause i act a little flirty you can get into my pants
    you think cause ive been used you can use me up again
    you think cause im sad you can take advantage of me
    but listen here, you aint got nothing on me

    cause ive been here and ive been there and ive dealt with all this shit before
    cause ive heard this and ive heard that so dont think ive never heard that one before
    you can not take advantage of me no no not ever
    no you wont ever touch me like that no no never no never again

    you think cause i get a little horny you can get me in bed
    you think cause im a bit sensitive you can get me upset then play me again
    but listen here, you aint got nothing on me

    cause ive been here and ive been there and ive dealt with all your kind of shit before
    cause ive heard this and ive head that so dont think i aint ever heard that one before
    you can not take advantage of me no no not ever
    no you wont ever touch me like that no no never no never again

    you think cause your bigger then me you can pull me down
    you think that im a little girl and i cant do nothing to stop you
    ohh woaahhh ohh ohh yea
    you think youve got what it takes to pull me down
    you think you got what it takes to keep me under your thumb
    you think youve got it all!
    but listen here, you aint got nothing on me

    Cause ive been here and ive been there and ive done it and felt it all before
    cause ive heard this and ive heard that and there aint nothing i havent heard before
    you think cause ive beeb hurt before it wont take much to hurt me again
    you think you got what it takes to keep me down
    but you aint got nothing at all
    cause im independent and you aint ever gonna touch me like that again
    you aint ever gonna look at me like that again
    you aint ever gonna get me alone
    no no never no no never again....




    Submitted on 2009-06-29 14:27:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i know what it feels like.
    i have this guy named cameron.
    he has beatiful eyes.
    me and him whenever i feel lonely hook up or
    when he is bored...
    and we always say "i love you"
    but we both know we don't mean it.
    so your poem reminded me of all my feelings.
    which is good.
    im adding this to my favorites.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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