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    dots Submission Name: A Love Ye Mairdots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Another poem in Scottish dialect


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    dotsA Love Ye Mairdots
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    For awe av been
    For awe a am
    An for awe thit a may be
    All never love anither lass
    The way thit a love ye

    A remember weel
    Yon day we met
    As yer haun in mine, it lay
    An when ye smiled thit bonnie smile
    Ye stole ma hert away

    A lost masel
    Tae awe yer charms
    Wae a fervour yet unseen
    Tae yer bonnie hair, yer fragrance an
    The look in yer blue eeyn

    How young an free
    Ye made me feel
    As a fell in love sae deep
    Sic feelings never known before
    Tae cherish an tae keep

    A never knew
    Thit love could be
    Sae precious an divine
    How blessed a feel tae ken the love
    Ye hungered fur wiz mine

    An even though
    Its been some years
    Since ye turned an walked away
    Ma hert, it still belongs tae ye
    An a love ye mair each day






    Submitted on 2009-06-29 14:43:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have to say wonderful! It reminds me of all the songs that my gramps used to sing to me. Being from Scotland, it was a favorite thing to do. He always loved to sing to me!!

    Karen
    | Posted on 2009-07-01 00:00:00 | by GoddessShakti | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaah, this is fabulous! I love the scottish brogue, and to see it accent poetry is outstanding!

    Great work, and a really fun and delightful (and touching) poem to read!
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so lovely I want to cry. I can hear you speaking these lines ( in imagination of course ). The end is sad, I wish it had been otherwise.
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
      :)
    | Posted on 2009-06-29 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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