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    dots Submission Name: Oh, headache of minedots
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    Author: harrieart
    ASL Info:    21 / Male / Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 11/5/13
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 55
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       So I'm having this headache..which came a tad before a nap and fully blown after the event.
    And then, I wrote.


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    dotsOh, headache of minedots
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    Like a screwdriver churning from the inside out
    My poor head wish it possible to scream and shout
    For the pain within my brain
    At least, in that place it seems
    That behind my temple
    Above the right brow...an irking pain does scream.
    What to do with this pain?
    I've heard a sugary Coke will fix
    but there must be something better
    than that cocktail made betwixt
    An entrepreneur and doctor
    From mistake a poison made
    Laced with the slower acting fructose
    Drunk and changed until this day.
    So I'd rather wait it in rhyme
    My remedy of patient breaths
    My system would be healthier made
    Without adding more stress.




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