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    dots Submission Name: Stand By Medots
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    Author: PhoenixHope
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 1/4/4
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 63
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 667



    Description:
       This is a poem that I wrote a while ago but I never had the guts to post it because it is mainly about me and my best friend. She has alway been there for me and we are very similar and we understand each other so really this is a thank you to my brillint best friend Naomi (Naoka Ravenwood).


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    dotsStand By Medots
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    As I look into your eyes,
    But to my surprise,
    You do not look away,
    For I once watched you through the day.

    I ask why you stand by me,
    Everyone else leaves me be,
    Afraid of what I might do,
    But I'm glad I have you.

    'You're like me, alone I am'
    What will people think,
    'I don't give a damn,
    I will stand by you so that you don't sink'.

    People's glares and moster shouts cut me deep,
    The cuts on my heart begin to weep,
    As I cry you help me see,
    That you will always stand by me.





    Submitted on 2009-06-30 05:47:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great job keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by sparkleshine | [ Reply to This ]
      Well.........I'm amazed! This is brilliant and I love it!
    awwwwwh!!!!!!
    Emma that is sooooo sweet!
    Wow!!!!!
    Your the best!!!
    Love you chick!!!!!
    <3
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by NaokaRavenwood | [ Reply to This ]


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