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    dots Submission Name: 1st Real - Lizdots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    Bytes: 700



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    dots1st Real - Lizdots
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    I'm not sure about your name

    Not even sure about your game

    I'm not sure you're as true to me as you make it seem

    If you're not sure about me, I can't make you be

    You love me the way I always wanted

    I'm not sure if it's as true for you

    I'm not trying to be crazy or creepy

    I'll just see where your soul takes me

    I don't want to be rude

    I just don't trust you

    I'm sure I could sometime

    I like the attention you give

    Something I'd never thought I'd get




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