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    dots Submission Name: The Real Medots
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    Author: PhoenixHope
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 1/4/4
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 53
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    Description:
       This is a song I wrote a while ago and it was about my friend who figured she loved her friend yet he didn't reciprocate her feelings.


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    dotsThe Real Medots
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    Chorus
    Please can you see me with your eyes,
    Behind this disguise,
    I like to be true,
    But I get nervous to look into your eyes so blue,
    Would you like me to be,
    The real me.

    Verse 1
    If I fall me will you catch me,
    Do think this was meant to be,
    Please hold me close,
    I want be the one you chose,
    Not this fake you see before your eyes,
    Please see behind my disguise.

    Chorus

    Verse 2
    You say you're my friend,
    But that's not where I want it to end,
    Can't you see the love I hold for you,
    I want you to see me the one so true,
    Feel my hearts song,
    I know that it isn't wrong.

    Chorus

    Verse 3
    I hear you say you care,
    Don't let it end these feelings are too strong to bear,
    I see my reflection in your eyes,
    But it's my disguise,
    Please don't let these feelings be a lie,
    Please don't say bye.

    Chorus x2





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