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    dots Submission Name: Ancient Minutesdots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Prose/Romance
    Total Views: 73
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 485



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    dotsAncient Minutesdots
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    It is fast, I am scared

    I'd rather be, than alone wondering where is a cutie that will love me for me?

    This is reality, not a dream

    As perfect as it may seem, take it in

    And together we'll win

    I'm new to your life and you're new to mine

    These last two days seem so old

    As though they've been over and re-told

    As if they were ancient minutes




    Submitted on 2009-06-30 06:06:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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