Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The horrordots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: GoddessShakti
    ASL Info:    32/female/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 12/9/12
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 31
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 485



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe horrordots
    -------------------------------------------


    The very thought of you
    even coming near
    sends darts of hatred
    straight to my core.

    Peeking round corners
    seeing shapes in the dark
    Brings the blackness of you
    Like shots to the heart.

    Shaking like thunder
    right down to my feet
    when the dreaded you
    begins to take shape.

    Where will I run to
    with no place to hide
    when the horror of you
    does really arrive.




    Submitted on 2009-06-30 12:35:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I agree that it is straight to the point, but the phrases you used seem, a little overdone. It's not bad, not at all. I just seem to be left wanting a little more.
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written.....and straight to the point.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.