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    dots Submission Name: Her Scars Are Yet To Be Preciousdots
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    Author: crimson_panda
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 58/72/80
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
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    dotsHer Scars Are Yet To Be Preciousdots
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    She walks like a prada
    Her scars hidden in make up.
    When will she learn?
    There's no use covering them up.

    Her scars are yet to be precious
    Precious to someone who will forgive
    Beautiful to someone who will understand
    But she always wears her make up.
    Though she's waiting for the day
    when she'll cry,
    mascara and foundation running down her face;
    a guy will remove the fake









    and love her.




    Submitted on 2009-06-30 13:57:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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