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    dots Submission Name: Half Way There dots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 12/17/32
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 47
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 893



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    dotsHalf Way There dots
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    Zhukov started the turn of the table
    Making the others able
    To stand up to Germany
    And have uncanny
    Strength

    Just there in Stalingrad
    Oh so glad
    The Luftwaffe couldn’t stand
    In the ice, mud, and sand

    Two years later
    We storm the Beach of Normandy
    Bloodshed on the sandy
    Isles in a conquest
    Thinking it was all over
    Hopes we would return home with the luck of clovers
    But then we found the camps
    Souls hanging in the gas lamps
    We freed those left
    And prayed for the victims of theft
    In hopes to never be bestowed upon with such bereft

    Knowing this was the end
    Of the suffering in the east
    Order restored and no to bend
    At least
    Peace
    Was half way
    Obtained






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