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    dots Submission Name: Getting Bitdots

    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 720
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       so cheesy but what can i say :)

    so i wrote this god probably like a year or two ago, i'm still with the guy that it is about, and when i read this it brings a smile to my face

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    dotsGetting Bitdots

    You're the electric pulse
    That makes my heart beat

    You're the green grass
    That tickles my feet

    You're the sunshine
    That makes me feel warm and soft

    You're the fire
    That melts away the frost

    Names need not be said
    As you lay next to me
    On this soft bed
    My cheeks blushing red
    Smiles glowing bright

    Please don't leave my sight
    You bring such delight

    You're the candle light
    That lets me see
    How wonderful things can be
    Flying high and free
    You're my wings
    That lifts me high in the sky

    Your touch so gentle
    It drives me mental
    The look on your face
    Knits lace
    Butterflies in my stomach

    You know who you are
    In my mind you never too far
    As we lay
    Let me just say
    Those three words
    That we both know too well

    Oh hell
    I've been bit
    So hard
    But I see no reason to throw a fit
    Just play the card
    In hopes I don't have to hit
    That bug into shards

    Submitted on 2009-06-30 16:49:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      What's cheesy about this? I thought it sweet with a funny twist at the end. Only one thing I'm not sure about and that is the spacing in between the lines, but that is only my opinion. What does everyone else think?
    | Posted on 2009-07-01 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]

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