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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1002



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    It says the words I cannot escape,
    It screams the truth,
    Whispers tears of love and pain,
    This song is so accurate.

    It hits close to home,
    With the lyrics tying me to hope,
    Tearing into my soul of nothing,
    This song is too true.

    Hearing the chorus with the things I wish were not true,
    Hoping they never come true,
    But knowing they are,
    This song is so factual.

    Weaving truths with lies,
    Genuine feelings walking through memories,
    So falls the heart again,
    This song is too real.

    So unfaithful to my dreams,
    So valid to my hurt,
    Too exact in digging in the knife I thought I could remove,
    This song… validates my thoughts.

    Searing through the hole in my chest,
    Burning through the bleeding edges,
    Blazing into my soul like a blinding light,
    This song sucks but it rocks.




    Submitted on 2009-06-30 18:25:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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