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    dots Submission Name: How Does a Rooster Get to the Roof?dots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 304
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 547
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1902



    Description:
       pushing aside goals for whatever reason/nothing is impossible. (traffic lights)


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    dotsHow Does a Rooster Get to the Roof?dots
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    The rooster crowed and saw the sun when he sang to the SKY, in the morning,
    He thought "I got wings, why can't I FLY?"
    He somehow climbed up to the roof, and THEN climbed down, (ironically) because he was too chic-KEN...

    But the man on the ledge is wondering the SAME,
    "Everybody has a face, but it's more difficult to obtain a NAME,"
    A competition makes it hard to sit at a DESK,
    When there's always people to meet and possibly impress.

    There's a talent in my closet, hiding with all of my skeletons...
    "I'm gonna clean it out before i die," I keep saying,
    "I wanna let it all out," I keep saying,
    I keep saying "How long will I say before i never do?"

    Too many indians, and not enough CHIEFS,
    So many wars we even fight for PEACE,
    How will I survive against the hour-GLASS?
    Sand falls when you sleep, and sit on your ASS...

    But the man on the ledge is wondering the SAME,
    "Everybody has a face, but it's more difficult to obtain a NAME,"
    A competition makes it hard to sit at a DESK,
    When there's always people to meet and possibly impress.

    There's a talent in my closet, hiding with all of my skeletons...
    "I'm gonna clean it out before i die," I keep saying,
    "I wanna let it all out," I keep saying,
    I keep saying "How long will I say before i never do?"

    All my dreams will never come TRUE,
    If I keep sleeping, I'll keep dreaming, but what will I ever DO?
    I can't lay in this bed like everybody AROUND,
    Waiting for my dreams to quickly slow me DOWN,
    Press the reset button after you find the power and fuck up...




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 00:56:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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