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    dots Submission Name: withdrawaldots
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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 882
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotswithdrawaldots
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    then dawns
    quiet acceptance

    no whisper
    no private thought
    or wistful smile

    just an
    ongoing absence

    and my
    muted
    heart




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 10:52:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      By sharing these words, you made us feel with you the bitterness of being "muted".. it shows that words are getting out of hoesty and truth...

    That's life!!

    Sometimes bitter
    sometimes sweet

    You may glitter
    You may regret

    MAN is the cruel
    Life is the best

    You just be cool
    And leave the rest


    All the best,
    | Posted on 2009-10-06 00:00:00 | by mohammad8682 | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and stands out with meaning, this poems shows peacefulness inside you, i like it very much

    Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-06 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Beulah. Ja liefkind - ek verstaan. En sterkte met dit. Self kan ek dit ook op my self toepas in my eie omgewing.
    Lyk my ons trek so saam deur die Lewe.

    Life is demanding - the best of you - always.
    Past and Present forms your Future.
    Luv u Dad.
    | Posted on 2009-07-03 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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