Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: withdrawaldots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 781
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 204



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotswithdrawaldots
    -------------------------------------------


    then dawns
    quiet acceptance

    no whisper
    no private thought
    or wistful smile

    just an
    ongoing absence

    and my
    muted
    heart




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 10:52:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      By sharing these words, you made us feel with you the bitterness of being "muted".. it shows that words are getting out of hoesty and truth...

    That's life!!

    Sometimes bitter
    sometimes sweet

    You may glitter
    You may regret

    MAN is the cruel
    Life is the best

    You just be cool
    And leave the rest


    All the best,
    | Posted on 2009-10-06 00:00:00 | by mohammad8682 | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and stands out with meaning, this poems shows peacefulness inside you, i like it very much

    Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-06 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Beulah. Ja liefkind - ek verstaan. En sterkte met dit. Self kan ek dit ook op my self toepas in my eie omgewing.
    Lyk my ons trek so saam deur die Lewe.

    Life is demanding - the best of you - always.
    Past and Present forms your Future.
    Luv u Dad.
    | Posted on 2009-07-03 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    176039

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Fasade written by jackz
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    I Do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry