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    dots Submission Name: Right?dots
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    Author: XxSkyelerxX
    ASL Info:    12/Female/Varies
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 11/27/16
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 1018
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 643



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       Eh.... I just randomly scribbled it down. Found it halfway decent....
    Eh.


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    dotsRight?dots
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    I'll never be good enough.
    I'll never be the best.
    I'm good.
    Hell, I'm great.
    But it's not enough.
    It'll never be enough.
    There will always be someone better.
    It's driving me mad.
    But what am I complaining about?
    I'm good.
    Hell, I'm great.
    That's all it takes, right?
    I just need connections.
    I just need people.
    They'll make me the best.
    And then it's smiles and sunshine from there, right?
    Right?
    Because I'm good.
    Hell, I'm great!
    Right?




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 11:56:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know this is old, but I feel like commenting. Deal. :3


    Anyways, yes, Amanda you are good. "Hell, you're great!" Heh, just don't let vanity get to your head. We both know how that can be, right?

    I think you're an amazing person, Manda. I don't think you should put yourself done because you aren't the best. Nobody can be the best; it's just impossible. Perfection doesn't exist.

    And no, smiles and sunshine doesn't always exist either. I don't mean to go all negative here, but we all know hard times always pop up in the world.

    Just remember that I love you, alright? <3

    ~Hannah
    | Posted on 2009-08-19 00:00:00 | by nekochan765 | [ Reply to This ]
      D:<


    Jelllllllllllllllussss.......ah.

    I could never write something good like that!

    D:<


    I lovvels it....


    Is it me or are all of my friends better writers than me? And better singers and dancers, and being coolio....
    | Posted on 2009-07-03 00:00:00 | by xxAlliexx | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this x3 but, It's sad you feel like that if your words are true. Eh, kinda happy too cause...


    Hell..You are great ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by TasteMyRainbow | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwith, Amanda dearest. You seem to be a strong person when spoken too, in fact you have you own little crown that floats above your head when I think of you. Amanda, I admire you, your strong, you have your own mind and opinion, your wonderful compared to nearly anyone I know, your trustworthy and such. But from reading this, it would seem you doubt that your your own, that you think it's everyone else who makes you who you are, it's true friends and family have a say in the molding of who you are, but in the end, it you who makes you that person. You allow people to influence you, but I rarely if ever see that happen with you deary. Your my independent woman! Don't ever think you need someone else to hold you up, I know your good like that, you like having people around, but you can go on your own if needed, and just so you know, your never alone, people will follow you through out your life, your a leader :3
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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