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    dots Submission Name: Cheatingdots
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    Author: WhoKnows
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 7/12/12
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 26
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 512



    Description:
       true about some freinds...


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    dotsCheatingdots
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    My fault...
    

    
All of it...
    
His 'extra girl'- Her sad tears...
    

    
My fault...
    

    
An attempt at love- Failure...
    
Red blood replaces her clear tears...
    
Why?...
    
I knew what was happenning...
    
I let it happen...
    

    
Why?
    

    
I don't know...
    
All I know is I created sadness...
    

    
Horrible- All gripping- Sadness...




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 16:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Cheating hurts. It hurts like hell! Most people feel that it's their fault when a loved one has cheated on them. However, cheating is exactly what it is. ( CHEATING ) That's why people hide it as long as they can until they've been caught. I like your expressions in this poem and I can truly relate. Take care.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by tea4two | [ Reply to This ]



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