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    dots Submission Name: The Easter Bunnydots
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    Author: CameraViolence
    ASL Info:    16/f/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 3/6/33
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 618
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1495



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    dotsThe Easter Bunnydots
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    The Easter Bunny, he's kinda funny, fat and warm and nice
    He brings you eggs, but how does he manage with short little legs?

    He hops down a trail with a bouncy white tail, and ears that bend in the breeze
    His Chocolate's divine, like an April Valentine, Dear Lord, don't let him have fleas

    Fat little Bunny you never bring money, but my siblings do love you so

    I'll gobble some Peeps while the sibs are asleep and no one will ever know

    The Easter Bunny, he's kinda funny, fat and warm and nice
    He brings you eggs, but how does he manage with short little legs?

    Why Easter Basket Grass is plastic cast I can not even dream
    Do you spin it out, with a hop and a shout, from your magic Easter Machine?

    Oh Easter Bunny how I'd like to meet you, but alas I fear my cat would eat you
    It's better you come in the night, although I may look a fright

    The Easter Bunny, he's kinda funny, fat and warm and nice
    He brings you eggs, but how does he manage with short little legs?

    The Easter Bunny is oh so sweet, we'll leave him crunchy carrots to eat.
    Or maybe Lettuce this year to entice him to spread his cheer

    Oh Easter Bunny hear me say, I don't like Jelly Beans, you can keep those away
    If you leave candy while I dream make it Chocolates with Marshmallow cream!




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