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    dots Submission Name: Lipsdots
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    Author: xSkybeilx
    ASL Info:    20/F/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 1/2/2
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 946



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    Hurt is evident
    Thy eyes shows truth
    Of thy wounded soul
    Which thy voice devoid
    So sweet and luscious are
    Those lips that uttered
    A simple phrase
    That drove thee to misery
    Thou unwillingly seek those
    Lips to lay unbound claim
    On the owner
    A quick glance at those lips
    Reawaken thy dormant
    Feeling thou hath stated
    Was lost
    Thy endures constant conversation
    Though thy phone
    Just to hear the soft
    Breath leaves those taunting
    Lips
    I love thee leaves those lips
    The end of the conversation is certain
    How three beautiful
    Words can cause so much unbound
    Pain
    Thou fight with thy own lips
    Keeping hidden the truth from thy love
    Thou leave your home
    Out to the rain thou goes
    Hide thou tears on this faithful day
    Call Valentines




    Submitted on 2009-07-01 22:19:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very much 'old world'. Very well written and your expression is excellent.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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