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    dots Submission Name: Exuberencedots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 50
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 979



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    dotsExuberencedots
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    Full of pride and standing tall
    She compells with but her voice
    She rallies groups of people to action
    Fanatacism spreads like wildfire

    From her highest moment
    To her lowest fall
    Her friends stand by her side
    To protect her from undeserved punishment

    Their Deep love is familiar
    For it is the same as her mothers
    They will always be there for her
    When she needs them most

    She will never be forgotten
    Only remembereed for eternity
    She will always stay
    Inside their very hearts

    A strong arm will always be there
    To give a needed boost
    And a gentle hand will be there
    To catch her when she falls

    She will always be loved
    She will always be close to our hearts
    She will always have our attention
    She will always have us by her side









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