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    dots Submission Name: No voicedots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 385



    Description:
       I've been upset lately. So I just wrote this random poem. It's not the best, but I like it.

    Constructive criticism please!


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    dotsNo voicedots
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    Why am I here?
    I have no voice, or opinion of my own.
    I am just another minion.
    Obeying rules,
    That are hiding the jewels in me.
    They do not listen,
    Their action on us are not fair.
    They tare out the real us,
    And order us wordless.
    Nothing seems to have purpose any more,
    Why can't I just break free?




    Submitted on 2009-07-02 09:31:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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