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    dots Submission Name: songs.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 801



    Description:
       idk.its cute.
    i took all the songs i knew and made them go with eachother..im a genius.
    *laughs evil-like*


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    dotssongs.dots
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    in the movie
    "summer days" meant love.
    "last restort"
    you're the one i thought of.

    "stupid cupid"
    always plays with our minds.
    "when you say nothing at all"
    sometimes isn't that kind.

    "runaway love"
    makes me want to be alone.
    "here without you"
    makes me feel "so cold."

    "like we never loved at all"
    sometimes makes me cry.
    "would you go with me."
    makes me feel "alive."

    i always find comfort
    in"where i belong"
    even if we don't really
    have a"love song"









    Submitted on 2009-07-02 09:51:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I love this! I love the fact that you implement the names of songs into the words of the poem just to get the point across that many songs influence the way we feel about a lot of things. Music reaches our souls and makes us feel and believe certain things, we just have to remember that the music we listen to most has to be the music in our hearts! Thanks Rachi for this great read, and I hope to read more! Keep up the fantastic work.

    ~Dreamer
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]


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