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    dots Submission Name: Why can't fish talk?dots
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    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17,Male,North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 5/5/4
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 666



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    dotsWhy can't fish talk?dots
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    I was sitting on my bed the other day, eating a very tasty sandwich, might I add. And, i got to thinking about an important topic. "Why can't fish talk?" It seems like they should be able to talk. We can talk and we're not much smarter than fish. How is that fair!? Now that I think of it, how come they can talk in the Cat in the Hat, by Dr. Suess, but the humans can't? Why can't there be a show where the fishies and humand can talk? Why must people seperate them? I was racking my brain trying to figure these simple questions out when....I dropped the last bite of my sammich on the floor.......Imagine my tears.....Poor sammich :[




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