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Submission Name: Gone dots

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Author:	trynfinity
ASL Info:	32/f/California
Elite Ratio:	4.36 - 124/117/77
Words:	149

Class/Type:	Poetry/Broken
Total Views:	80
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	970

Description:
Losing the love of your life and not knowing why.

Gone

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I'm lost these days without you
not knowing what to do.
Nothing feels the way it should
I don't know how to make it through.

Every promise
is now a lie.
Gone forever
it all just died.

No hope no laughter
no safety no trust.
Everything I believed in
erased as if only dust.

I love you
you swore you loved me.
Still here I am alone
was this my destiny?

I believed in forever
when whispered from your heart.
But forevers not even close
and we're here so far apart.

Why did you do this?
Why did you walk away?
I believed you and you loved me
now my heart cries and pays.

I don't know how to do this
how to live alone.
When all I want is your touch
and you to come back home.

July 2,2009

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  I like this although it saddens me giving me thoughts of when I chose to leave my love from CO to OH (home) to start over to stop the way my life was headed. Its tough to be on either end of this whether your the one who leaves the relationship or the one who ends up being left.

Nevertheless you have posted a great write here it speaks volumes to me although it is sad... it means a lot

Kudos
Jackz
| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  Hm... That sucks. Life's not always easy and sometimes nothing makes sense. Time to move on I guess...
| Posted on 2009-07-04 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  life is always like that.
ugh!
but your poetry was amazingly written.
i enjoyed reading it.
rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-07-03 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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