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    dots Submission Name: A Mistake in Your Logicdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Mistake in Your Logicdots
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    It was a logical mistake
    Logically it's fate
    Which has no logical trait
    Logic for logic's sake

    Batter the word to bring it out
    Since it has no place here in this pain
    As logically there is no reason
    Try to override emotion

    Things will work out or they won't
    And if not, they work out some other way
    Regardless, things start where we can remember
    And they end with us there
    So why get worked up over it being what it is?
    Just let it be.




    Submitted on 2009-07-03 05:46:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hummmm, this is confusing ot me. but what I did find out was, in the first stanza you used the topic of the poem. In a good way, second you slantered your first usage, and third stanza you made it so illogical to use logic :3 Er, that's what I got >-> . . .. but I'm kinda messed up, so who knows....
    | Posted on 2009-07-03 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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