I have been here!! Yelling at the voices that come from no where to torement me and plague me screaming out for that one person who was always there never there and is now deaf to the pain dripping from your every move.
I like this,, it was quick yet it grabs you from the start, holding on to you like a rollercoster and before you know it your breathless and it's over,
but you want to read it again.
I like this one a lot. It's a very well told poem that describes the persons wanting of the other person, and a little voice inside of them keeps calling that persons name. The poem gets these feelings across to the reader very well and help the reader feel exactly how the poems tone implies. The poem also creates the belief that love will drive you insane sometimes, but in the end, all that matters is that you have each other. Very well written Rachi. I love your work, keep it up!
Submission Name: voices
