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    dots Submission Name: Werewolf dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Werewolf




    Ravage with me
    Lady Dark Panthera claws of red
    And thrash against a starving mouth
    Eaten by tongues and lips
    Devouring inside surrender

    Rip upon my skin those tender ache
    And push your want to a digging nails
    Which renders you helpless

    Resuscitate your kiss to mine
    And strip past your urging
    Tribal heat
    Throat guttural whisper my name

    Starve me stretched to your nakedness
    So I may hunger more

    Rhythmical impetuous cause
    The night hears your cries
    Pinned to the moons cool wall

    Vampire at you neck Lady Dark
    Pulls at your flowing red
    To a ravenous climax
    Soaking wet upon my knees
    I emerge from a tidal bliss

    The slow trickle line of sweat traces down my back
    Full moon temptress












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