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Submission Name: Werewolf dots

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Author:	col13x
Elite Ratio:	2.78 - 113/154/327
Words:	147

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
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Werewolf dots

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Werewolf

Ravage with me
Lady Dark Panthera claws of red
And thrash against a starving mouth
Eaten by tongues and lips
Devouring inside surrender

Rip upon my skin those tender ache
And push your want to a digging nails
Which renders you helpless

Resuscitate your kiss to mine
And strip past your urging
Tribal heat
Throat guttural whisper my name

Starve me stretched to your nakedness
So I may hunger more

Rhythmical impetuous cause
The night hears your cries
Pinned to the moons cool wall

Vampire at you neck Lady Dark
Pulls at your flowing red
To a ravenous climax
Soaking wet upon my knees
I emerge from a tidal bliss

The slow trickle line of sweat traces down my back
Full moon temptress

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