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    dots Submission Name: Sculpture of a Souls Skindots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsSculpture of a Souls Skindots
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    Sculpture of a Souls Skin

    A chorine sorceress
    Her sweat the glistening
    The sultry pleasures of trembling thighs
    She presses to her pleasure
    Holds me wicked with her eyes

    And upon the slow perspiring trickle
    Fingers trace these aching agonies
    Leaving them the dry river beds
    Sculptures skin of centuries
    Beckon to the flood plains
    With the delta’s of your hair

    Rising rhythm falling soft inside a heat
    The pounding fills
    Impaling
    On cries which taste so sweet

    Your fall of Auburn clinging
    Thrown back to shaking shuddering breasts
    You burn inside the fountain
    Expressed bitten on your lip
    And I drown within the tide of you
    To the red swollen purple tip
    Deep within the ecstasy
    And deep between your legs

    Here by the pounding blood
    The animal sheds its camouflage
    Beast within desireth flood
    Growls predatorily in my touch

    Ageless Panther of dark devour
    Strenuous ardour of your dripping sex
    Speaks to me of a kisses surrender
    In the captivity of your souls endeavour
    On breath so hot and panting
    Excitement coupled to the wanting
    The taste upon your shoulder
    Of slowly running sweat

    Love screams inside the agonies
    Of too expressive tongues
    And would pass into eternity
    Its gasping never to be undone

    With the palm which slapped to my chest
    Tried to clasp a beating heart
    And all your beauty so released
    From the whimpering in your throat
    And I remember you forever
    In the sculptured skin of centuries
    Calls me to the flood plains
    In the delta’s of your hair



















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