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    dots Submission Name: Playing With Firedots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsPlaying With Firedots

    Playing With Fire

    Afraid for your miscreant soul
    While the Devils licking tongues of flame at your heel
    With oh so dirty thoughts

    Afraid for the flesh
    As you are lead to the pits
    All the torture there in of your imagination conceives
    Be pleased, to afflict on someone else

    Swallow your morals
    Like a sanctity pill
    A Eucharist aspirin swilled down on holy water

    Fear the flesh you stalwart middle class
    While the upper-class
    Enjoy what you cannot
    As you wallow in the resistance of sin

    And narrow your life to acquiescence
    Puerile in such judgements
    Of fickle moralities pleasure

    Live a life unlived
    And all its pleasure turn to guilt and reprieve
    Salvation will come
    When it ends

    Ascend then, the Jacobs Ladder to heaven
    Never knowing what it meant
    To kiss with abandon

    But rather, suckle to demon lips
    All those desires in their fetish of flesh
    One last look at the skin you left

    Resist my swarthy middle mass citizens
    And ply the trade
    Of your own oppression

    Condemn me, I dare you, to some raging inferno
    Where the appeasing of your righteousness
    Knows no bounds
    In another climactic prayer for torture

    I will play with the bonfire
    Rather than mess with poor dripping candles
    I will stand proud and defiant
    And declare that I

    Am Human

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