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    dots Submission Name: Audition Pandora/ Kiokodots
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    Author: OneWingedAngelX
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2/0/4
    Words: 1005
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       **In original writing Pandora's speech is italicized. I don't really know how to do those kind of things on ES right now but I will have it figured out for the tourney to make things smoother for the readers and judges.


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    dotsAudition Pandora/ Kiokodots
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    “I think we should get moving now Kioko…”
    This voice came from a young woman with light pink hair, a black pair of cat ears with a matched long black tail with a pink tip and a set of odd colored eyes. She looked up at herself in a mirror across the room and sighed as she ruffled her own bangs. “I promise I’ll take you shopping once we win the tournament…” Her voice was low and had an aggressive side to it, yet was very calm and gentle to whom she was speaking to. Her eyes weren’t normal, they were a deep shade of crimson and appeared to have some parts that looked more black than red, they darted back and forth looking at the few other women that were looking at dresses on racks next to her. They looked at her baffled; she could hear them talking about her.
    “Who is that girl talking to? And what’s up with her eyes… they’re kinda creepy”
    “Maybe she’s got a mouse in her pocket” One of them snickers as the others join in on the laughter.
    “What’s a neko doing in this part of the country… don’t they have live in another country for that matter?”
    They continued to gossip and laughter at her, she clenched her fist and glared at them. ”Damn it Kioko… you know I hate going out into public… people are so irritating…”
    The girl looks down at a dress but now with bright crystal blue eyes, she smiles and brushes a stray hair from her face. “Pandora relax… This is why I keep telling you that I can handle myself when I go shopping! Besides would I look cute in this?” She giggles as she pulls up the lacey pink dress in front of herself. This voice was much different, yet coming from the same girl, her voice was now sweet and gentle, very carefree and naïve. She spoke louder than before and giggled and smiled a considerable amount more than before. “Besides… I highly doubt you would take me shopping after we win… you’ll just be too busy for me after all this is over with Pandora…” Her bright blue eyes sadden as she puts the dress back down onto the table; tears fill up her eyes as she closes them tightly. “You’ll leave me won’t you Pandora!” She whispers as tears fall down her cheeks.
    Her eyes fade to the deep crimson they were earlier and reaches up and wipes the tears from her face. “Kioko… how many times do I have to tell you… I’m not going to abandon you once we win. What reason do I have to leave you behind? You know I love you Kioko…” She gracefully brushes her cheek as her eyes turn bright blue again; she grabs the hand on her face with the other and holds it tight. She blushes deep red as she giggles and spins around. “I love you too Pandora! Let’s make sure we win this so we can be happy and go back home!”
    The women that were watching earlier stand dumbfounded by the conversation they just overheard and the scene they just witnessed. “Does that girl have a split personality?” “Did you see her eyes?! They changed colors!” “Is she in love with herself? What the hell?”
    Her eyes faded back to crimson red as Pandora took over again, she grinned and walked over to the women that were gossiping about her and Kioko. She approached the woman who seemed to be their leader, a short blonde woman with a bikini top and a big rack. Pandora grazed her fingers across this woman’s collar bone and licked her cheek. “You shouldn’t be nosy; it’s quite rude to listen to other people’s conversations… especially when their consoling their loved one.” She grins and walks back to the table and picks up the dress for Kioko and walks to the cash register. She hands the cashier money and takes the bag with the dress folded up nicely inside with tissue paper and ribbons coming out of the bag. Pandora nods and walks out the door of the store with a huge grin on her face. “And yes Kioko, I think you would look lovely in this dress…” She smiled and continued walking down the street as she listened to Kioko thank her over and over again inside the thoughts that they shared together.
    Pandora’s smiled faded as she entered her own thoughts, she was nervous for once in her life. She didn’t want to lose in this tournament, she couldn’t and neither could Kioko. Kioko ran away from home to win this tournament for her and Pandora, Kioko who left her role as duchess and inheritance behind, she was risking losing everything that she has earned in order to make herself and Pandora happy, she would never forget that sacrifice. Kioko’s dream could very well come true if they win this tournament, so they agreed to come to Myntion Manors tournament so they can win the prize.
    “I regret nothing Pandora…” She stops walking and opens her eyes to reveal that they are now bright blue. “I want to be with you… and if we can win this and have our wish be granted then we can be together in a better situation.” Kiko smiles and closes her eyes again. Reopening them to reveal crimson eyes, Pandora grins as she continues to walk towards the Myntion Manor. “The sex would defiantly be different and much better wouldn’t it Kioko…” She laughs then stops in front of the hotel, it’s doors seemed all too inviting for Pandora. Her tail swished back and forth as patted her left bicep to make sure her throwing knives were still in the case strapped to her arm. Pandora then stepped forward and pushed the door open and whispered under her breath to her beloved Kioko. “Let’s go Kioko… no turning back…no running away…no losing… I will win this tournament.”





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