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    Author: Scaredheart
    ASL Info:    15/ Female/ NC
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 92/62/50
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 678



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    dotsTo Jeffreydots
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    Dearest,
    when you feel down, I'm am here to pull you up in my arms and make you feel like we are flying.
    When you feel rejected by the hot girl that just passed you by,
    you should know that was me getting something to drink and I'll be right back.
    When you think you are all alone,
    you should know I'm sitting out side of your window hanging onto the seal screaming for you to help me inside.
    When you are depressed,
    you should know I'm hear to take that feeling and kill it.
    But most importantly,
    you should know I love you.
    Also,
    every word of this is true <3





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